The Elements Review: Interwoven Stories of Trauma
Young Freya stays with her preoccupied mother in Cornwall when she meets 14-year-old twins. "The only thing better than knowing a secret," they inform her, "is having one of your own." In the time that ensue, they sexually assault her, then entomb her breathing, a mix of anxiety and frustration flitting across their faces as they eventually liberate her from her temporary coffin.
This could have served as the shocking focal point of a novel, but it's just one of multiple horrific events in The Elements, which assembles four novellas – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to achieve peace in the present moment.
Debated Context and Subject Exploration
The book's release has been marred by the addition of Earth, the second novella, on the candidate list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other candidates withdrew in dissent at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been cancelled.
Conversation of LGBTQ+ matters is not present from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of significant issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the effect of conventional and digital platforms, parental neglect and assault are all explored.
Distinct Accounts of Trauma
- In Water, a mourning woman named Willow relocates to a remote Irish island after her husband is jailed for awful crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a athlete on trial as an participant to rape.
- In Fire, the grown-up Freya manages retaliation with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a parent journeys to a funeral with his young son, and wonders how much to reveal about his family's background.
Suffering is accumulated upon suffering as damaged survivors seem destined to encounter each other repeatedly for forever
Linked Stories
Connections proliferate. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who reappears in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one account return in homes, taverns or courtrooms in another.
These plot threads may sound complex, but the author understands how to power a narrative – his previous popular Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been converted into numerous languages. His straightforward prose shines with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to experiment with fire"; "the first thing I do when I come to the island is modify my name".
Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength
Characters are drawn in concise, impactful lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes ring with melancholy power or insightful humour: a boy is struck by his father after urinating at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour swap barbs over cups of watery tea.
The author's ability of bringing you fully into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an earlier story a authentic frisson, for the opening times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is dulling, and at times nearly comic: pain is accumulated upon trauma, chance on chance in a bleak farce in which damaged survivors seem destined to meet each other again and again for eternity.
Conceptual Complexity and Concluding Assessment
If this sounds less like life and resembling uncertainty, that is aspect of the author's message. These damaged people are weighed down by the crimes they have endured, trapped in routines of thought and behavior that agitate and spiral and may in turn damage others. The author has discussed about the impact of his own experiences of abuse and he depicts with understanding the way his ensemble traverse this risky landscape, striving for treatments – isolation, cold ocean swims, resolution or refreshing honesty – that might provide clarity.
The book's "fundamental" structure isn't particularly instructive, while the rapid pace means the examination of sexual politics or digital platforms is mainly surface-level. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a completely engaging, survivor-centered chronicle: a appreciated riposte to the common fixation on detectives and perpetrators. The author demonstrates how trauma can permeate lives and generations, and how time and care can quieten its reverberations.